Today we finished adding the final pieces to our soundtrack and then we decided to get some feedback from our teacher. This was to get another outside perspective who would be honest on anything that we needed to improve in order to make our work of a high standard.
So once we had our discussion with our teacher she suggested that the beginning was explicit enough to show the audience that the couple were not happy together, she said that wasn't any direct hints that Maddie could of done it at the start they were all towards the end. But overall our feedback was good our teacher just said that we should consider making it more clear that Maddie is angry at Elliot. So an example of this would be 'I hate you' or 'I wish you were dead' this automatically makes Maddie the prime suspect to the target audience.
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